Like the first four lines. Not so keen on last line. Doesn’t scan at all and message a bit muddled.
“and Will finished up on all fours” would be a cruel echo of the goalmouth scene as Cheltenham scored their equaliser. But I like it and bear no malice whatsoever towards the lad.
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The Wycombe went off to the Moors
Supported by pedants and boors
Undone at the back
As defenders they lack
Led to "Ainsworth sacking" flame wars
Like the first four lines. Not so keen on last line. Doesn’t scan at all and message a bit muddled.
“and Will finished up on all fours” would be a cruel echo of the goalmouth scene as Cheltenham scored their equaliser. But I like it and bear no malice whatsoever towards the lad.
How about this for the last line ?
"So we end up with high scoring draws"
Nice one @JohnnyAllAlone.
Indeed. The last line was weak but someone else needed the cubicle.
Norovirus?
That gave me a bleary-eyed early morning chuckle. Tip of the cap to you @Manboobs.